The Eclectic Pen - More Than I Can Take


By: IONE L. (zaneygraylady)   + 85 more  
Date Submitted: 2/23/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 74
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  I work for them
from dark till light
tired as a dog
and she starts a fight

life hands out more
than I can take
so I had a few beers
and came home late

it ainít like Iím
my old man
couldnít keep a job
but I sure can

she gets a look
like a scarred kitten
it gets me mad
and I start hittin

I screwed up
I went to far
Iíll buy some flowers
and swear off the bar

Iíve always loved her
Iíll never stop
Iíd stop drinkin
if sheíd shut up


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Virginia S. - 2/24/2007 7:11 PM ET
You've got some stuff to express. I like it. V~
Claudia R. (BrokenWing) - 2/25/2007 3:11 PM ET
nice to see the other point of view represented, tells me you have empathy and understanding. He's lucky to have you.
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