The Eclectic Pen - So, I thought I would post some poetry and let the world know how screwed up I am...lol


By: DarkRaven - ,   + 2 more  
Date Submitted: 6/26/2009
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 156
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  Lie to me
You came to me with an empty heart
and a knife hidden behind your back,
cold, pitiless, you turned my dreams into nightmares
you made my love and ugly dirty thing
something to be ashamed of
stab me in the back...............................lie to my face.

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Taste of you...


A taste of you..
A rivulet of blood
small taste of the life that flows through you
I cut you open just to put you back together
I cut you open
to know you,
to love you.

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Haiku______Wet
The feel of you against my thighs
the warmth of your tounge
the sweet release into your waiting mouth..


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Eva L. (wearetrees) - 7/1/2009 4:12 PM ET
That last one was HOT!
Jennifer T. (jenn27) - - 7/4/2009 11:34 PM ET
i'm guessing you didn't actually laugh out loud as you titled this page...
Jesse (EddyKrueger) - 7/6/2009 6:03 AM ET
I like the haiku!
DarkRaven - , - 7/6/2009 7:50 PM ET
Lol. I did laugh when I did it..but jokingly. I like my poetry and I think its pretty good. However weird it may be..lol.
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