The Eclectic Pen - Tit For Tat


By: IONE L. (zaneygraylady)   + 85 more  
Date Submitted: 3/10/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 26
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  our minds create
a god of hate
his name we must defend
wrong or right
so we fight
neither side will bend
tit for tat
this for that
will it ever end




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Donna (countrysun2sea) - - 3/11/2007 8:23 PM ET
Excellent wording. Great poem. Thaks for sharing. Donna
Marta J. (booksnob) - 3/12/2007 5:27 PM ET
Very, very pertinent to our world today--unfortunately. Well done.
KRISTY D. - 3/13/2007 5:47 AM ET
Very nice...says a lot in little words
Judy M. (foreveramom) - 3/15/2007 6:36 PM ET
Great question,no easy answers. Thanks for sharing.
Susie W. (swhite) - 3/20/2007 12:17 AM ET
Love your stuff Ione! Would make some great song lyrics.
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