The Eclectic Pen - Travel Haiku


By: Tom C. (Tommy)   + 8 more  
Date Submitted: 1/22/2007
Genre: Travel
Words: 45
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  Travel Haiku


Dark waves lap gently
Unseen sails seek warm, soft breeze
Sultry velvet night


Traffic, noise, and haste
Roman streets host modern life
Ancient stone below


Night on Bourbon Street
Open doors spill jazz and blues
Mississippi near


Badlands stretch ahead
Majesty, mystery, fear
Like evil castles


Blueberries grow wild
Picked warm from summer sunshine
High above the lake



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Brooks H. (FoundItOnAnAirplane) - , - 1/22/2007 11:29 AM ET
Absolutely vivid imagery . . . and beautiful!
IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 1/22/2007 3:10 PM ET
Very nice. Good imagery
Marta J. (booksnob) - 1/22/2007 7:18 PM ET
Very, very nice.
P. B. (bard68) - 2/25/2007 9:35 PM ET
Perfect images - take me right to the places.
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