The Eclectic Pen - Triptych


By: Paul H. (nessus19) - ,   + 43 more  
Date Submitted: 2/8/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 23
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  There you are in your "now"
And here am in my "then"
And the gulf between us is a mocking thing
That has taught us nothing


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IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 2/8/2007 5:19 PM ET
clever
Ann K. (liblit) - 2/8/2007 8:54 PM ET
seems a bit trite to me.
Eva L. (wearetrees) - 2/19/2009 2:44 PM ET
Space and time is as fickle as love, wouldn't you agree?
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