The Eclectic Pen - Twisted


By: April V. (Spooky)   + 9 more  
Date Submitted: 10/9/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 80
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  Inside out and upside down
Long lost in the vast sea
Swirling, swirling, all around
Is what itís like to be me

Twisted like the vines on the wall
Covered with long, sharp thorns
Icy cold in the spring and the fall
Cloudy on many a morn

Always at war, even in peace
With emotions that are not real
These tears that fall, they will not cease
Iím not sure what to feel

Inside out and upside down
Long lost in the vast sea
Swirling, swirling, all around
Is what itís like to be me.


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Susan J. - 10/9/2007 9:47 PM ET
I love this....
Silvercat - 10/9/2007 9:58 PM ET
A beautiful brooding piece...very nice!
Kai R. (GrauFrau) - 10/18/2007 2:51 AM ET
Wow, excellent imagery! Very evocative, thnaks for sharing this!
Terry J. - 10/28/2007 3:29 PM ET
this is so passionate . . . it really makes you think of your own self
Claudia R. (BrokenWing) - 3/4/2008 2:20 PM ET
very good.
Roy B. (mountdewboy) - 9/29/2008 8:33 PM ET
Nice piece of work & reading
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