The Eclectic Pen - Untitled


By: Sophira B. (sophiraness)   + 13 more  
Date Submitted: 11/18/2008
Last Updated: 11/18/2008
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 126
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  tinge my sorrow
with a little sweet
a creamy, exquisite chocolate treat
or maybe something spicy
burn the tongue's delight
even something icy
or cold to ease the hot

tinge my sorrow
with a little silence
a dull, encompassing ache
it fills the room like cloudy mist
a layer of dew skin on my face

tinge my sorrow
with a little sadness
no- they're not one in the same
it takes a hopeless, fleeting heart
till realization of that difference came

tinge my sorrow
with a little anger
a short burst of emotion
that transforms on itself into shame
the bleeding of a heart denied
an empty wind that carries not my name

tinge my sorrow
with a little patience
a small reminder of
the true meaning of love
I wait with painful blood of seconds
and promise to hold this in remembrance



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Veronica S. (snowkitty) - - 11/19/2008 1:28 PM ET
This is good...reminded me of some sad times in my life.
Justina C. (stinasstoryspot) - 11/19/2008 9:39 PM ET
That's beautiful.
Joyce M. (j3m) - 11/20/2008 6:21 PM ET
I really like this; thanks
Lena S. (SquirrelNutkin) - 11/25/2008 7:31 AM ET
lovely
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