The Eclectic Pen - I Wear This Mask


By: Erin B. (redwingslover)  
Date Submitted: 1/5/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 39
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  I wear this mask to hide my pain,
my broken heart, and to keep me sane.
Inside feelings are rushing around.
Outside my mouth is closed.
I don't make a sound.
I wear this mask to hide my sorrow.
Hoping for something better.
Maybe tomorrow.


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Debra O. (honestaccountant) - , - 1/5/2007 10:03 PM ET
I like it
Dorri F. (CaptainsWife) - , - 1/6/2007 7:48 PM ET
I love this.... I'm very impressed....
Kristine S. (NHBookLover) - 1/7/2007 8:30 AM ET
Sad...but ending upon a upbeat note....there is always tomorrow.
MiMi-G - 1/7/2007 1:18 PM ET
Erin this poem touched my heart. I've felt this way often in the past 22 months. Thank you this poem did bring me a smile!
VALERIE H. - 1/7/2007 5:04 PM ET
I COMPLETELY UNDERSTAND. I FELL THIS WAY SOMETIMS TOO. VALERIE
Claudia R. (BrokenWing) - 2/10/2007 6:17 PM ET
Very good. Hit a nerve with me since I do the same thing.
Terry J. - 10/28/2007 4:07 PM ET
u should keep it going - this really is great
Gussie R. (gussie) - 8/10/2009 7:34 PM ET
love the poem ive been doing the same thing for 6 years awesome job :)
Selena E. (Rayne) - , - 8/22/2009 8:57 PM ET
This is so awesome that there are no truer words.
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