The Eclectic Pen - What happened to Them


By: Robert C. (thecoolbookgeek)   + 5 more  
Date Submitted: 11/23/2009
Last Updated: 11/23/2009
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 19
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  And when they go

we all know

that they will never come back

And as they leave

we shall grieve

and say to ourselves,"Alack!"



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Jesse (EddyKrueger) - 11/23/2009 5:00 PM ET
Cool rhyme at the end. Almost whimsical. You're a great guy by the way.
Silvercat - 11/24/2009 1:28 PM ET
This has a nice quality and I see it as commentary about years passing....bittersweet. You ARE a great guy, incidentally!
Marta J. (booksnob) - 12/16/2009 12:36 PM ET
I like this a lot. It has the feel of an old nursery rhyme.
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