The Eclectic Pen - this is what they said !!!


By: Amanda R. (amandaripsam)   + 10 more  
Date Submitted: 7/23/2007
Genre: Romance
Words: 184
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  this is what they said !!!
This is what they all said!!!!
"So what if I lay here and moan?
I enjoy feeling sorry for myself.
I enjoy having you nurse me and I need you to take care of me.
Just donít want your support or comfort or need your love
trusting you is not enough.
I need a mother a nurse and a maid to help me with my every need.
I canít get out of bed all I want to do is sleep
and want to sleep as long as I can
it donít matter how much I sleep
I just need you to feel sorry for me."
Sad alone scared confused
I'm depressed and I love you with all my heart
I want your passion and have to keep you near
my family they love you more then I do
help them even if your not with me
I rather play video games then to keep you happy
but stay and keep my company
donít leave me this is my plea cause everyone believe were happy"
I feel
Lost shout out from everyone else and pissed off
This is what I feel at the moment


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katzpawz - 7/27/2007 12:44 PM ET
Sounds like the tag lines of at least a thousand co-dependant relationships. Brilliantly written!
IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 7/31/2007 12:20 PM ET
Very good get away as fast as you can.
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