The Eclectic Pen - When?


By: Jessica B. (jebers)  
Date Submitted: 11/13/2008
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 70
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  My body is tired
My soul uncertain
My mind is uninspired
What waits beyond the curtain?

I want to be brave
To feel complete
No longer a slave
Is that too great a feat?

My eyes are leery
My hands shaking
My fingers are weary
Is this inspiration in the making?

I am running out of time
And have much to say
With a mountain to climb
Will someone show me the way?

The moment is coming
Darkness is near
I am succumbing
Tonight, I swallow my fear.


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Sophira B. (sophiraness) - 11/14/2008 10:01 AM ET
wow. I like this, the images are clean, but still convey a deep troubled feeling. you've inspired me, if not yourself!
Veronica S. (snowkitty) - - 11/14/2008 3:37 PM ET
Awesome...I really liked it.
Elaine B. (embchicken) - , - 11/16/2008 6:18 AM ET
Wonderful!
Marta J. (booksnob) - 11/17/2008 5:08 PM ET
Yeah--go for it! Good message!
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