The Eclectic Pen - Who knows haiku


By: ROBERT J.   + 7 more  
Date Submitted: 5/29/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 28
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  I am dancing
my shadow is dancing
so, who follows?
and who leads?


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IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 5/29/2007 3:50 PM ET
I like it but should it be three lines?
Lena S. (SquirrelNutkin) - 6/1/2007 7:50 AM ET
hey Robert.....I really liked this a lot....good one
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