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...these linking verbs and auxiliary verbs can drain your sentence of impact. They make your action verbs weak.
Be specific with your verbiage; not vague. Show the reader the action instead of pointing at it.
Of coarse you can write whatever you want, however you want. But why would you write unnecessary words when you can make the sentence sharper?
Last Edited on: 11/18/09 4:42 AM ET - Total times edited: 2