
Shaun (
sec) wrote on 9/18/2009...
Fairly standard "making a deal with the devil" theme. While not much in the way of an original concept, the story had some promise -- until you read it. It doesn't read well at all: the flashbacks are oddly-placed, the dialog is confusing, and the story simply does not flow well.
The artwork is good, so it has that going for it. But that's about it. Note that this is intended for older teens due to a few scenes of graphic violence (and probably because there is some talk of teen pregnancies).