The Eclectic Pen - Haiku Minus Sixteen

By: Scott W. (Rev) + 36 more
Date Submitted: 2/13/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 1
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IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 2/15/2007 4:02 PM ET

I think you lost yours :)

Marta J. (booksnob) - 2/15/2007 4:42 PM ET

Um.....Scott?

Jim H. (Pecos45) - 2/15/2007 11:00 PM ET

I can critique this in one word too. "Stupid"

Scott W. (Rev) - 2/15/2007 11:25 PM ET

Silence is golden When your thoughts are not polite Keep it to yourself

Scott W. (Rev) - 2/15/2007 11:26 PM ET

Corrected version: Silence is golden/When your thoughts are not polite/Keep it to yourself

Mark M. - 2/17/2007 10:26 AM ET

I rather like it. It’s a bit reminiscent of Ogden Nash. The meter was interesting, and overall, I like that it was appropriately short.

Samantha W. (Amsamfa) - 2/17/2007 10:34 PM ET

Brilliant.

Courtney Z. - 3/1/2007 3:43 PM ET

This is the best one!!!!!!! Talk about judicious editing. LOL

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