Helpful Score: 2
Well I'd love to say something good about this book but it was awful. I found myself flipping through to the next few pages to find out if it got any better. I am so sad to say that I did finish this book and I feel as if I may have lost a few brain cells along the way. It was basically porn there was a small plot. However every page the main character Gideon had to stop and fuck something no matter what even the trees. Even though he had professed his love to Rhiannon he still seemed to keep screwing other people and things. Not particularly even a great love story sometimes you just get a bad apple and this was one of those times.
Helpful Score: 1
I read the first one (Lord of the deep) and though I didn't hate it I didn't liked it either. I already had all 4 books in the series so I figured why not read them all, they can't be worse then the first one... oh boy was I wrong!
Things went down hill from the second chapter. NONE of the characters had redeeming qualities. Gideon was behaving like teen horny half-wit, his woman was having 'opposite day'... permanently, if someone said don't do this she was sure to do exactly that. So many unexplained pop-in characters/entities were meddling in their story it was like throwing together a bag of rice and sand and then picking though it. The plot dragged and I could tell 5 pages beforehand what will happen. By 1/3 of the book I skipped whole sections and didn't loose the story line. I did finished it just to see the twist at the end. (NO spoilers) I will not say anything beyond the fact that had Gideon behaved as he was presented: the powerful immortal with 'eons' of collected knowledge and experience the book would have ended in chapter 3.
My rating: As romance goes 1 star. As erotica goes 0 stars (S** for profit, revenge, or debt is no erotica. Hero F** everything on 2 legs and ... had it on with trees?!) Story line is all over the place so 0 stars
I'm not a sucker for punishment so I'm trading the other 2 books unread....
Things went down hill from the second chapter. NONE of the characters had redeeming qualities. Gideon was behaving like teen horny half-wit, his woman was having 'opposite day'... permanently, if someone said don't do this she was sure to do exactly that. So many unexplained pop-in characters/entities were meddling in their story it was like throwing together a bag of rice and sand and then picking though it. The plot dragged and I could tell 5 pages beforehand what will happen. By 1/3 of the book I skipped whole sections and didn't loose the story line. I did finished it just to see the twist at the end. (NO spoilers) I will not say anything beyond the fact that had Gideon behaved as he was presented: the powerful immortal with 'eons' of collected knowledge and experience the book would have ended in chapter 3.
My rating: As romance goes 1 star. As erotica goes 0 stars (S** for profit, revenge, or debt is no erotica. Hero F** everything on 2 legs and ... had it on with trees?!) Story line is all over the place so 0 stars
I'm not a sucker for punishment so I'm trading the other 2 books unread....
Helpful Score: 1
I'm a sucker for punishment. I didn't like the 1st in the series but yet I already had this one so I read it. I ended up skimming this one a lot (maybe half the book).
