Outlaw Marshal (Thorndike Press Large Print Christian Historical Fiction)
Outlaw Marshal - Thorndike Press Large Print Christian Historical Fiction Author:Al Lacy, JoAnna Lacy With Chief U.S. Marshal John Brockman strongly encouraging him to accept salvation? outlaw Whip Langford determines to go straight. He won’t go back to a life of robbing banks and trains. It’s not long before Whip is tracking old acqu
Oh, how I wanted to like this book! But unfortunately the stilted dialogue and odd explanations made it impossible to get into the story. The writing of dialogue reminded me of the way a sixth grader writes. The main character just gives these long-winded "speeches" when he is answering a question. It also seems that contractions are hardly used and this makes the dialogues even worse in the stilted department.