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Wonderfully over-written! Purple prose sometimes makes for a fun read--for example:
But her eyes, flashing now as she cast a tremulous welcoming smile at him, twinkled at him with those incomparable blue-green facets, so similar to her turquoise gown and reminiscent of the precious stones still locked away in his castle's dungeon hold.----Her perfection made him grip his pommel and clench his teeth.
But her eyes, flashing now as she cast a tremulous welcoming smile at him, twinkled at him with those incomparable blue-green facets, so similar to her turquoise gown and reminiscent of the precious stones still locked away in his castle's dungeon hold.----Her perfection made him grip his pommel and clench his teeth.