The Eclectic Pen - My Package Came Today

By: Joyce M. (j3m) + 16 more
Date Submitted: 8/14/2008
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My package came today; it was too heavy to lift
so it stayed at the door and I felt adrift
pacing back and forth, wanting it opened and out
having to wait for a man's muscular clout
and now it's raining fast and hard
no chance the innards are not marred
Oh, this is hard, this is cheap
what we sow, is what we reap

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Sabriena W. (hazeleyesrangeleyes) - 8/14/2008 4:36 PM ET

Awwww.

Deborah T. (nysbikergirl) - 8/25/2008 4:09 PM ET

I'd get it out of the elements one way or another no man's strengh will render me pulled asunder my will shall bring me a way, a path to salvage my delivery, my gift, my plunder be it the young ones next door oe a stranger, possibly the surge of my anger I will not allow any prospect of defeat to lead me to wrath the way to success must come to pass

Joyce M. (j3m) - 8/27/2008 10:08 AM ET

Thanks Deborah, you made me laugh out loud. Normally I am with you on that, but sadly no one around at all and the thing weighed at least a 100 lbs and is breakable. Having no other avenue, I wrote a poem. :D :D And actually, it turned out better than I thought, it is not ruined after all.

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