The Eclectic Pen - air on low with windows down


By: IONE L. (zaneygraylady)   + 85 more  
Date Submitted: 6/18/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 46
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  driving with the windows down
grooving to the reggae sound
air on low creates a cool breeze
it's decadent but I do as I please
long time since I've felt so free
don't know whats come over me
feels like a plane I am flying
nowhere to go but keep on driving


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Silvercat - 6/19/2007 2:26 AM ET
I enjoyed this one quite a bit, Ione. This is one of my favorite feeling free stints...and sometimes I actually get a cheapie hamburger at Mick's and eat as I drive. It reminds me of times with my four boys when they were small. Thanks for jolting a sweet memory!
Lena S. (SquirrelNutkin) - 6/19/2007 8:45 AM ET
I liked this! Brings up a lot of nice memories....thanks
Jim H. (Pecos45) - 6/19/2007 9:03 AM ET
Excellent, Ione. I think your writing skills are growing leaps and bounds. :)
Marta J. (booksnob) - 6/19/2007 11:22 AM ET
I love this SOOO much. I can just feel where you're at here--and what could be better than reggae as a backdrop???
Amanda R. (amandaripsam) - 6/20/2007 3:52 AM ET
sounds like a planned road trip for the near future. I liked the style
Lisa C. (IrishHillbilly) - 6/29/2007 7:19 AM ET
Ditto....I like the emotions this invokes, nothing quite like the sensation of driving around with the windows down.
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