Poor writing!
The story is ridiculous, it's a big mess, so many pages of just 'thoughts' with no dialect
The main character has a secret I never did find out what it was, too many side stories that are boring
Mainly this is just a writing mess!!
The story is ridiculous, it's a big mess, so many pages of just 'thoughts' with no dialect
The main character has a secret I never did find out what it was, too many side stories that are boring
Mainly this is just a writing mess!!
