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This is my second book from this author, and I am pretty sure it will be my last. Her writing style seems very immature and juvenile, espeacilly when she writes sex scenes. The story was okay, but a bit slow. Will be swapping this one away.

Steamy!!!

Toni Blake's mainstream romances are pretty hot, so I was curious how much of a difference there'd be when she dons her erotica nom de plume. Except that the sex is... shall we say, more adventerous?... there's not that much difference. She writes with more of a plot than the other erotica authors I've sampled and with a great deal of character depth.

I can't figure out what the reviewer who calls the writing immature and juvenile (which are synonyms, so we know she's not a writer) wants unless it's hard core porn. Personally, I prefer a story with my erotic scenes and Lacy Alexander delivers.

Very, very childish. This book is poorly written (think junior high.) I'm glad I only paid a quarter for this at a FOL sale. Not worth the time/effort to pick this one up.