The Eclectic Pen - Breakfast


By: Mark D. (Jarhead)  
Date Submitted: 7/16/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 8
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  Food beneath his feet
A pumpkin-breasted robin
Feels the vibration


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IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 7/16/2007 8:24 PM ET
good
Silvercat - 7/16/2007 9:07 PM ET
This hits the senses dead-on and I really enjoyed it! Now we are even-steven... :)
Marta J. (booksnob) - 7/17/2007 10:47 AM ET
Very, very nice.
Lena S. (SquirrelNutkin) - 7/19/2007 6:09 PM ET
I like this.....:)
Rex F. (Hyena) - - 8/20/2007 11:31 AM ET
Nice. Feels good to read it
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