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She looks at him with her silver eyes. He wags his tail. She scowls at him. He stares at her. Her hair is raised. He is ready to run. Wait... She bolts! He chases! The race is on. There is a whirrrrrr- flowing through out the house. One is in wrek. The other is playing. A swish through the kitchen. A bang. A crash. From game to chase to match. On and on he 'plays'. She hates the seconds. He enjoys them. She flees to the top of a dresser. He hopes to wait her out. Quetness. Yelp! Silence. A whimper. She stares at him. He leaves to chew on the exotic sofa. She curls up on the bed and hopes to get some sleep. He'll win one day.

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Kami (Kidsey) - 3/8/2009 11:21 PM ET

Please comment! :) PLEEEEEEASE!!!!

Marta J. (booksnob) - 3/9/2009 8:03 PM ET

Ah yes, you've captured the essential difference in the personalities of cats and dogs! Wouldn't count on the dog winning, though... (might want to fix the typos?)

Kami (Kidsey) - 3/9/2009 10:13 PM ET

Thanks! He'll win one day is just the dog's thought. :)

Deanna T. (romance-writer81) - 3/11/2009 1:35 PM ET

Just curious as to how old you are?

Kami (Kidsey) - 3/16/2009 7:03 PM ET

Most likely, younger than you.

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