The Eclectic Pen - Chill of Winter


By: James B.  
Date Submitted: 1/21/2010
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  Chill of Winter





the winter stills

as our hearts' chill,



but together we'll

fight against all that kills...



12-15-09

james k. blaylock


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Michelle R. (izzygone) - 1/22/2010 3:20 PM ET
Indeed I like it! It's simple, straight to the point, and almost like a hiaku if you extended it some more. :)
Eve M. (budgie11) - - 3/10/2010 4:30 PM ET
love it
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