The Eclectic Pen - Endless Sweet Hush


By: Elizabeth B. (meowysmiles) -   + 29 more  
Date Submitted: 12/2/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 82
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  In the fresh air on a day not knew, comes a sense of brisk view.
A sparkling rainbow overwhelming the senses with awe.
Having just laid to rest one his favorite was the rainbow,we said goodbye.
As we saw him in the sky leaving the wake in the sky,tears in the eye.
He is ok for we did pray and the rainbow came out with the overwhelming view.We were all in a hush,such a sweet hush an element of neverending suspension and release,to let him go.


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IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 12/5/2007 10:27 PM ET
pretty
Terry J. - 12/16/2007 5:25 PM ET
beautiful - great work
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