The Eclectic Pen - Fall


By: Joshua S. (lintz69)   + 2 more  
Date Submitted: 5/18/2009
Genre: Uncategorized
Words: 88
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  Here is one of my favorite poems. I wrote this a few years ago. Please leave comments and let me know what you think. Even if you think it's horrible. :)



A leaf begins to fall
The season is here
Death to us all
You were the one to fear

A leaf begins to fall
A child cries
A dream I saw
A leaf to the ground lies

Halfway to the ground
A child begins to fall
Before making a sound
His head to the wall

A leaf hits the ground
His body lay still
With no one around
He has no more will


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Janet S. (weekendreader) - 6/7/2009 11:33 PM ET
intersting and a little dark
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