I am so glad this book was short, otherwise I might not have finished it. There were numerous grammar and spelling errors within the first few pages and the story jumped back and forth between twins to the point where it was just a mess trying to figure out who was who. There should be some sort of separation between characters.
On to the story... can we say totally unrealistic?? Not like I've ever been there before, but I can't imagine some chicks going to Cabrini Green, trying to question people to get info on a murder and beefing with some disrespectful dude when they don't even live there. You ain't going into the hood ask questions like that... period. Not to mention they just happened to run into someone everywhere they went. Yeah, there could be coincidences, but not that many. It could've been a great story, it could've worked, but it was too choppy and inconsistent.
http://sheenathebookgeek.blogspot.com/2011/09/book-review-fire-flames-by-coco-davis.html
On to the story... can we say totally unrealistic?? Not like I've ever been there before, but I can't imagine some chicks going to Cabrini Green, trying to question people to get info on a murder and beefing with some disrespectful dude when they don't even live there. You ain't going into the hood ask questions like that... period. Not to mention they just happened to run into someone everywhere they went. Yeah, there could be coincidences, but not that many. It could've been a great story, it could've worked, but it was too choppy and inconsistent.
http://sheenathebookgeek.blogspot.com/2011/09/book-review-fire-flames-by-coco-davis.html
