The Eclectic Pen - Gabriella


By: Jessi H. (willpowered)   + 3 more  
Date Submitted: 3/6/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 37
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  Gabriella

There is a birthday present growing
In a far off land.

I wait to see her until she speaks
Chinese, English,
I donít know which.

My brother sired her
In a far off land.

Born on my birthday.
Heíll never forget the date again.


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IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 3/6/2007 8:00 PM ET
I have a grandaughter born in China December 31. We are going to visit this August. Her name is Andora. My son is the father.
Tammi M. (beadsandbooks) - 3/6/2007 8:53 PM ET
Very sweet, I have a niece who was born on my birthday and another niece who was adopted from China.
sunshinems - 3/7/2007 11:16 AM ET
ooooooooooooooh! Love it! It has a softness and paucity that reminds me of some "bamboo and silk" music. Well done.
Susan B. (slbs) - 3/7/2007 8:32 PM ET
i like it...dark, but intresting
Marta J. (booksnob) - 3/9/2007 9:17 AM ET
Love the irony. Well done!
Malina L. - 3/15/2007 9:00 PM ET
That brought tears to me eyes. I love it!
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