The Eclectic Pen - Greenhouse


By: Joanne S. (Jorusha)   + 12 more  
Date Submitted: 8/16/2008
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 24
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  Greenhouse

Green light-
Swimming through air like lettuce soup
I open my mouth and breathe in plants.
Leaves, stems, branches, flowers,
Dissolve within me.
I sweat life through every pore.


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Sabriena W. (hazeleyesrangeleyes) - 8/16/2008 7:18 PM ET
I haven't been inside greenhouses very much, but I enjoy gardening (sometimes).
Marta J. (booksnob) - 8/17/2008 8:46 PM ET
Oh, nice!!!!
Lena S. (SquirrelNutkin) - 8/23/2008 6:44 AM ET
I really like this. There is such a lovely smell of life when your working in your plants and earth. :) Nice
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