The Eclectic Pen - Haiku Minus Sixteen


By: Scott W. (Rev)   + 36 more  
Date Submitted: 2/13/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 1
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IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 2/15/2007 4:02 PM ET
I think you lost yours :)
Marta J. (booksnob) - 2/15/2007 4:42 PM ET
Um.....Scott?
Jim H. (Pecos45) - 2/15/2007 11:00 PM ET
I can critique this in one word too. "Stupid"
Scott W. (Rev) - 2/15/2007 11:25 PM ET
Silence is golden When your thoughts are not polite Keep it to yourself
Scott W. (Rev) - 2/15/2007 11:26 PM ET
Corrected version: Silence is golden/When your thoughts are not polite/Keep it to yourself
Mark M. - 2/17/2007 10:26 AM ET
I rather like it. Itís a bit reminiscent of Ogden Nash. The meter was interesting, and overall, I like that it was appropriately short.
Samantha W. (Amsamfa) - 2/17/2007 10:34 PM ET
Brilliant.
Courtney Z. - 3/1/2007 3:43 PM ET
This is the best one!!!!!!! Talk about judicious editing. LOL
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