The Eclectic Pen - The Joy Of A New Journal!


By: Tina H. (EclecticHSmom)  
Date Submitted: 5/4/2007
Last Updated: 5/9/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 15
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  A new, unwritten journal!
Favorite pen
Silky slide
Words on the glide
Slow at first
Then flowing freely
Gathering dreams diurnal


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Marta J. (booksnob) - 5/4/2007 5:35 PM ET
This is really nice.
Jim H. (Pecos45) - 5/4/2007 8:41 PM ET
Me too!
IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 5/7/2007 3:24 PM ET
nice
Sandra (mycatscanread) - - 5/12/2007 7:49 AM ET
I like this maybe because I love journals. I like how your words speed up at the end to mirror what you're saying.
K J. (dappledart) - 5/12/2007 11:48 PM ET
Well captured! I myself re-experienced the new Journal this year. I always feel the "importantness" of that new First Entry. My version would probably end up repeating itself: A new, unwritten journal! Blank Page I like the "silky slide", "flowing freely", "dreams diurnal" (I am not sure "preferred pen" would improve it any.) I also like the "gathering dreams" imagery. Thanks for sharing it.
Lena S. (SquirrelNutkin) - 5/25/2007 8:00 PM ET
I really enjoyed this!
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