I appreciated that the author wrote a real story, and didn't give in to repetitive, gratuitous sex scenes. Sure, we're all reading a romance novel and we expect a certain about of sex, but I thought she did a good job giving us just a little at a time, without boring us with pages and pages of throbbing members.
I was disappointed with the resolution of her trouble with her father. I am trying not to spoil anything, so I'll just say that I wish she could have had a confrontation with him, and ended up the victor. I felt like that was taken from her.
All in all, the writing was good (or I wouldn't have gone past the first 2 chapters!) and the plotline held my interest.