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Topic: Nine to Five vs. Check In

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Subject: Nine to Five vs. Check In
Date Posted: 2/12/2008 12:28 AM ET
Member Since: 1/11/2008
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Ok, i have posted the first three parts to my novella Check In and the first two parts to another novella, Nine to FIve. i am looking for suggestions on the two stories. I'm wondering which seems to grab people more, which packs the right chemistry. I want to know which one I should focus my energy on. I would appreciate the insight!

 

here is a link to all the stories!

http://www.paperbackswap.com/the_eclectic_pen/all_member_stories.php?m=OVQrZDc4TWtweFU9

thanks!

 

shannon