The Eclectic Pen - The Ones, Chapter 1: Bipbop Jimmy


By: Laurie M.  
Date Submitted: 3/2/2010
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  Chapter 1:Bipbop Jimmy
"Late,late,late," chirped the alarm alien. Bipbop woke up and hit the alarm alien on the head. The alarm alien known as Hibet waddled over to his pod and went to sleep. Bipbop jumped out of bed and slid down a tube landing on the front step wearing the usaul: jeans,Converse and a t-shirt. He already had his backpack on. Bipbop pushed all four buttons on his watch. Zip-Zomp-Whiz-Hiss. In front of him appeared a hover board. Bipbop jumped on and pushed off. He zoomed by stone and rock buildings. Most of the Castle reagion is made of stone.

That day at school Bipbop hung out with Razzle. Razzle is 12, the same as Bipbop. They stayed in for recess and played Chep. Chep is like a game called chess they used to play back then. You have 10 peices and you have to get your space ship into the other guys force feild. Bipbop always wins.

Bipbop was riding home when... Whosh-Suck-Lush.


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Laurie M. - 3/2/2010 6:02 PM ET
Look for chapter 2 on 3/3/10.
Jesse (EddyKrueger) - 3/10/2010 10:41 PM ET
wow, you should really keep this story going. It seems like science fiction to me. Also reminded me a little of Back to the future. Good start to the novel.
Michal W. (Princess101) - 3/30/2010 6:21 PM ET
Who is Whosh-Suck-Lush?? I love these stories!
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