The Eclectic Pen - Personify


By: Donna R. (Turtlelady)   + 4 more  
Date Submitted: 1/23/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 52
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  What does my home feel
When I am not here

Is it happy for the silent moments
Or sad without the noises of life

Today is the day I will not leave
To go on errands, spend the dough

I will stay with you my peachy haven
See if you notice
Or just close your blinds and go to sleep


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Jim H. (Pecos45) - 1/23/2007 4:10 PM ET
Love this. Great thoughts, Donna.
Tabitha C. (tcarlsonwade) - 1/25/2007 11:05 AM ET
I really like this, Donna. I especially like the rythm--it is contemplative and thought provoking.
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