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Topic: Prologue of a True Love Story - Feedback needed!

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Subject: Prologue of a True Love Story - Feedback needed!
Date Posted: 4/1/2011 6:18 PM ET
Member Since: 7/19/2010
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Hi everyone, I'm currently writing a book about a true love story.  I'd like to know if it's something people would be interested in reading.  

Here's the prologue:

I am one of the few people in this world who can say, without doubt, that I have found my soulmate.  Before I met him, I liked the idea of soulmates.  My favorite TV show featured a couple that gave definition to the word soulmate.  As I watched them, I hoped that someday I would have a relationship like theirs, but I knew I never would.  Television and books made it easy to believe in soulmates, but those couples were fictional.  I had yet to meet or hear of a person in real life who had undoubtedly found their other half.  Being as it was, I had a hard time believing that there was one special person out there for everyone.  Even if there was, I couldn’t imagine how two people destined to be together would ever find each other.  It seemed impossible.  After all, there are nearly sevenbillion people in the world.  But despite the odds—the extremely low odds— I did find my soulmate, so now I know that can happen.  It is my wish for our story to give hope to the millions of people out there who have given up on true love.  It is possible to find the person you’re meant to be with, you just have to have faith and let fate lead you in the right direction.  True love and soulmates are real, my fiancé and I are living proof.

Please let me know what you think so far.  Any feedback would be much appreciated.  I'm also looking for someone to critique parts of my book so if you think you'd like to please PM me.  Thanks so much! :)  

Date Posted: 4/1/2011 6:34 PM ET
Member Since: 10/28/2008
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Jessica

 

 It sounds like something I would read. 

Date Posted: 4/2/2011 12:42 PM ET
Member Since: 7/19/2010
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Thanks, Bertie.  Would love some more feedback!