The Eclectic Pen - The Raindrop


By: Patricia C. (Lucyboo)  
Date Submitted: 4/13/2009
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 35
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  A tiny little bubble breaks through a wall of white.
It races with the others, shaken from a flash of light.
It splattered to the ground,
and then it fell apart.
That tiny little bubble,
reminds my of my heart.


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Jordyn L. - 4/16/2009 5:47 PM ET
I love it... but check the last line. Wonderful story though (it says. reminds my of my heart, when I think you meant .reminds me of my heart)
Kami (Kidsey) - 4/16/2009 11:33 PM ET
Yeah! the words fit perfectly together. Its supercalafridilisticexpealadosious! (34 letters in the word!) I love writers like you! ITS PERFECT!!
Kate H. (LittleLadies) - 4/18/2009 11:42 AM ET
Adorble! Simple and satisfying.
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