The Eclectic Pen - silly celestial metaphor


By: REBECCA O. (sunnybrookgal)   + 2 more  
Date Submitted: 2/25/2009
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 45
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The moon is a silver dollar in the pocket of the sky,
The stars copper pennies to be spent when passing by.
The sun is a shining piece of eight in the hand of a pirate brave,
The planets pearly marbles in the pouch of a black-clothed knave.


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Joyce M. (j3m) - 2/25/2009 10:49 AM ET
lovely
Blake B. (Blakeish) - 2/25/2009 5:35 PM ET
Shweet.
Marta J. (booksnob) - 2/27/2009 8:57 AM ET
Sweet--can see this residing in a children's anthology.
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