The Eclectic Pen - Silver Lining


By: April V. (Spooky)   + 9 more  
Date Submitted: 10/9/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 77
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  Clouds fill every corner of my mind.
Darkness covers me like a thick blanket
And I cannot see.

My thoughts turn cold--cold like the winter.
Cole like the inside of a freezer
And I cannot feel.

Chaos fills my ears, so full of noise.
Loud, like a thousand horns blowing
And I cannot hear.

I was drowning in the swirling darkness,
In the cold I was freezing.
And then you came.

You filled my life with warm, bright sunshine.
You brought a peace to overcome the noise
And I am loved.


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Linda T. (herbtime) - 10/10/2007 12:30 PM ET
That how it is with depression. and coming out of it. My husband believed in me and stood by me. The Lord was with me the whole time. I like the poem. L
April V. (Spooky) - 10/10/2007 1:10 PM ET
Thanks L. I'm still struggling with it, but my fiance has always been there for me.
Donna M. (donnaintherockies) - 10/26/2007 2:34 PM ET
yes, like dark then light, night then day, black then white, no hope then new hope, bleak then bliss, life without Him then life with Him!!!
Roy B. (mountdewboy) - 6/20/2008 8:26 PM ET
Nice work... Can feel that coolness of the weather & then the warmth of loving arms
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