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The Eclectic Pen - Sleep - Haiku


By: Silvercat -   + 23 more  
Date Submitted: 6/27/2011
Last Updated: 7/8/2011
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 8
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  Night - blank black blanket.
Weariness demands surcease;
Morpheus beckons.


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hingram77 - 7/31/2011 6:56 PM ET
huh. This is one of the best Haiku I've seen on here. I don't know if I'm so fond of the assnosance of 'blank black blanket' because the tongue starts to twist but I really love the last line. Very creative.
Marla C. (mommommom) - - 9/13/2011 10:56 AM ET
Excellent!
Nora F. (nora777) - 8/15/2020 8:13 PM ET
would that this were dependably true!
Nora F. (nora777) - 8/31/2020 1:53 PM ET
and I actually love the challenge of "blank black blanket"
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