The Eclectic Pen - Suicide of a Loved One


By: Joshua S. (lintz69)   + 2 more  
Date Submitted: 5/18/2009
Genre: Uncategorized
Words: 64
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  There he lies before me
Everyone crying around him
Dead for all to see

He took his own life
Tears cannot be held back
It cuts us like a knife

What if I did this
Would he still be alive
What if I did that

What could have been done
Nothing can I do now to bring him back
With earth he now is one

He said his goodbyes
Tied all his loose ends
Why didnít I realize


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Katheryn B. (OneYeshua888) - 5/22/2009 2:40 PM ET
Deep.
Natalie G. (ilikepie) - 5/26/2009 8:49 PM ET
.......good....
Claudia R. (BrokenWing) - 5/27/2009 12:35 PM ET
I liked this. People considering suicide seldom think of the impact on their loved ones. It's a permanent solution to a temporary problem. Well written.
Abby M. (smileyabby1800) - 5/29/2009 6:21 PM ET
Hi. I just love this poem. It's just so well written. But, I want you to know that there's nothing you could have done to stop it. That's probably what everyone's told you, but it's seriously coming from my heart. I wish you only the best! Lots of Love, Abby
Joshua S. (lintz69) - 5/30/2009 11:42 PM ET
Thanks all.
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