Helpful Score: 2
This book was so awkward that I couldn't even finish reading it. Very corny!
I guess I was in a bad mood, but I do NOT like my erotica in an 'options' format (If you want A, continue reading. If you want B, skip to page ---)I found it very distracting. Aside from that, I didn't like the storyline - too far out & unbelievable. The characters were self-absorbed & foul-mouthed (every other word starts with f - totally unecessary)
The writing style was very simplistic; no motivation, no mood, no character development; just hardcore sex. It read more like porn than erotica - and yes, there is a BIG difference!
The writing style was very simplistic; no motivation, no mood, no character development; just hardcore sex. It read more like porn than erotica - and yes, there is a BIG difference!
