I enjoyed this second installment of the of the McKay family but it totally needs a good editing. There were many, many grammatical/spelling errors. I can gloss over that but if grammar is a problem for you, it will drive you batty. I should think someone of Ms. Walker's caliber would have her work reviewed before publishing. Maybe there was a hurry to get it in our hot, greedy hands. LOL.

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