The Eclectic Pen - Want to rub my white rabbit? - A twisted take on Alice in Wondeland


By: Star U. (macgyvershe)   + 5 more  
Date Submitted: 3/1/2009
Genre: Horror » Dark Fantasy
Words: 63
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  Want to rub my white rabbit?
you know that you do
want to rub my white rabbit
Iíve been waiting for you

to rub my white rabbit
thereís nothing to fear
you can touch it now
you can touch it here

this rabbits got fur
that will weasel your mind
rub my white rabbit
do be so kind

want to rub my white rabbit?
be careful, of course,
my rabbit is evil
and can be such an arse


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Susan Q. - 3/2/2009 10:20 AM ET
Strange but a good piece of work
Kimberly Z. (chiKaD27) - , - 3/3/2009 9:24 PM ET
Hmmm, not sure what to think of that one. Poetic, though.
Blake B. (Blakeish) - 3/3/2009 10:56 PM ET
Haha, nice
Kerry M. (eduman) - 3/5/2009 5:24 PM ET
I don't typically care for poetry but I enjoyed this... but not enough to rub your white rabbit i'm afraid.
Stacy B. (stori) - 3/8/2009 4:19 PM ET
kinda strange and awakard
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