The Eclectic Pen - When You Took Your Love Away


By: Adriane L.   + 2 more  
Date Submitted: 1/10/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 83
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  When You Took Your Love Away
Reflections of Me

Like a sudden thunderstorm
On a bright sunny day
That's how I felt
When you took your love away
Like the beautiful bright moon
On a clear, cool night
When the big dark cloud blocks
The wonderful glow
That's how I felt
When you took your love away
Alone in a room full of people
That's how I felt
Whenever we were apart
Now I feel as though I am lost in the world
I feel as though you took away my heart
When you took your love away


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Jim H. (Pecos45) - 1/10/2007 5:37 PM ET
Moving, Adriane. I suspect all can relate.
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