The Eclectic Pen - Who Said


By: Doaty F. (doatylucky)   + 5 more  
Date Submitted: 8/22/2009
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  Who Said

Who said you could fix me?
Who gave you the right?

Iím not broken.
Where you see a disease of the mind,
I see the reality of the world.

What if I think youíre crazy?
What if I see it for what it is?
What if I see you for who you are?
Do I get to put you on drugs?

Your world is cozy.
My world is poor.
Your world has love.
My world has emptiness.
You drive a car.
I ride the bus.

You donít feel my pain.
You donít feel my disease.
You donít see my family reject me.
You didnít lose your hair with treatments.

Who said you could fix me?
Who gave you the right?
Iím not broken.
Where you see a disease of the mind,
I see the reality of my world.


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Laura B. (Lbrownblack) - - 10/10/2009 2:07 PM ET
sounds a lot like how many people view their relationships with their doctors.
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