Pam B. (PamelaK) reviewed on 6/29/2009 + 1215 more book reviews

The premise of this book sounded interesting and downright believable. One twin (the city mouse)was outgoing, the owner of a brothel. The other twin (the country mouse) was shy, overweight, and frequently overlooked. But one of the male prostitutes working at the brothel brings her out of her shell and falls in love with her - sorry, just not gonna happen. The writing was so bad; no character development, no explanations as to why the characters felt the way they did, or why they changed their minds. The dialogue was so wooden and stilted it was laughable. And the subplot (the shy twin wants to write erotica)was so contrived it was corny. If you're looking for erotica, this book is NOT it.
It left me cold, and skimming through it to see how it ended - ugh - a happy, very sappy ending. Don't waste your time or your credits.

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