The Eclectic Pen - Feminist Rap

By: IONE L. (zaneygraylady) + 85 more
Date Submitted: 4/16/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 66
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I ain't yo ho
I ain't yo bitch
So ugly words
made you rich

You can't buy me
with your bling
Honey I want
the real thing

I want a man
with a diamond heart
A man who's kind
A man who's smart

Can you sing
a song of love
a song inspired
by heaven above

I am your sister
I am your mother
I am your daughter
I am your lover

I am a godess
I am a queen
Without your soul
what does it mean

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JOYCE W. (luvthemgoats) - 4/16/2007 11:11 AM ET

So true, so true

Marta J. (booksnob) - 4/16/2007 3:58 PM ET

Oh, so good!!!

Lynn B. (seraphina) - 4/16/2007 4:54 PM ET

Very, very good.

Tom A. (TomsBooks333) - 4/16/2007 5:20 PM ET

I like it! We need the old R-E-S-P-E-C-T back.

Maggie M. - 4/17/2007 11:22 AM ET

You ROCK, girl!!!

Claudia (BrokenWing) - 4/17/2007 4:49 PM ET

I think someone should set this to music and release it. It would be great.

Margaret S. (morgan2010) - 4/17/2007 5:08 PM ET

I can't tell whether I like it or not, but that doesn't matter. It is well done and I think that conts for alot! I like peotry here is my haiku for the week: \ Naked as Adam the fig tree drops its leaves before the fall. John Ridlands Have a good day.

Shirley C. - 4/18/2007 8:44 PM ET

Ione: As a 70's women's CR group member, I agree...you can call me ho, bitch, or whatever, but I know who and what I am....and sticks and stones will break my bones, but names will NEVER hurt me! And I will laugh at you when you call me those names....

Kristen C. (greenotter) - 4/20/2007 1:49 PM ET

Very nice! If only we all felt this.

Nancy K. (oldteach) - 4/23/2007 1:38 PM ET

This is beautiful and speaks very deeply.... thanks for sharing. Nancy

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