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The Eclectic Pen - [NO TITLE PROVIDED]

By: Stacy B. (stori)   + 4 more  
Date Submitted: 2/27/2009
Last Updated: 3/5/2009
Words: 401

  The first of many fears I felt was when I found myself indulged in water, jerking out of a hypnotic trance, and also jerking out the water.I gasped for breath....... it took me a while to stay calm enough to actually look around the room. This was not my bathroom. This was not my house. I look down.................. and this is not my BODY.
"Get out of the bathtub, grab your towl, dry off, and wait for futher instructions." A man apperared and out of shock i covered myself. He rolled his sea blue, piercing eyes and did a cat walk type of move with his thin body. He had neon-white eveything. White shoes, pants, shirt, and even his skin was a pale color. His looks were that of a model but he did not look threatening.
I sat and stared at the wall. I don't know where I am. I don't know who I am. And I think th at guy has mistaken me for another person. I MUST BE DREAMING. The man turned and glared at me, I know better to attempt anything because he is in front of me and behind me there is a wall.
I slowly approach the man and he turns away and without looking hands me a towel. I slowly and cautiously wraped it around me. I was crying now. I didn't know what to do. I did not know if I was going to get raped and killed by this strange man, I mean don't millions of people die this way? He looks at me, as if he has been through this before, and smoothly wipes my tear away.
" This is all scary now, but I will explain. Noow follow everything I tell you, okay? It's he best thing to do now."
He leads me to a hall. From there, he leads me to a room, the second to last door in the hall. Should I scream for help?
" Don't, no one is here but you and I."
He givs me clothes and sits me down. I scream anyway.

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Joyce M. (j3m) - 2/27/2009 11:03 PM ET
Ok, I want more.
Kimberly Z. (chiKaD27) - , - 3/2/2009 7:21 PM ET
Kami (Kidsey) - 3/2/2009 8:00 PM ET
Thats great! (But you did spell a coulpe things wrong :) Just letting you know. ) (I have sooo many things spelled wrong in my writing and stuff. Sometimes its hard for people to read.)
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